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Sonny
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 Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:42 pm Post subject: Errors/Plot Holes -- Help us edit |
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So I was just skimming a chapter at the end of the first book and there was an entire scene where Ryan refers to Connors as "Andrew". I have NO idea how this slipped under the radar for over a year but it did.
So, if any of you reread the first book or are reading it for the first time, if you notice any glaring mistakes, feel free to post here to let us know. And I don't mean grammatical errors or something, there will be a ton of those I'm sure and we'll pick those up ourselves.
But if you notice something like I just mentioned, some kind of plot hole, name changes, confusion in descriptions or anything really odd enough to be pointed out, please do so. Feel free to do the same in Afterimage although I think Afterimage is less all over the place than the first book.
Thanks in advance,
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Nymph
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The first time you mention the club in Monterrey, you call it Solar - I think it's when Sin meets Jessica out the front - I think - and then it's just randomly Lunar.
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Sonny
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| Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 6:03 am Post subject: |
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| Nymph wrote: | | The first time you mention the club in Monterrey, you call it Solar - I think it's when Sin meets Jessica out the front - I think - and then it's just randomly Lunar. |
that's actually not surprising because when i was writing the initial Sin Gets The Job Scene, i named the damn club solar after having already named that convention center Solar. *cough* *dumb blond?*
is it the very first time in the scene when he first sees Vampastic Jess? |
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TigressLea
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:26 pm Post subject: |
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Well if you read Vanilla: the first time Zachary's looks are mentioned it says he has hazel eyes...
I think it's Emilio in Afterimage who mentions Zach's 'baby blues' and I remember how confused I was when I read it always imagining Zach with brown eyes  |
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